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Ariel,
truly spell-binding!

posted by Nautikos on February 18, 2007 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Nice post ariel,
be waiting for the next part.

posted by richinstore on February 16, 2007 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

Reni

 

Why, thank you! High praise indeed!

posted by ariel70 on February 16, 2007 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

I love both your poetry and your prose. However, your poetry is my
favorite.  Why?  Because you have the unique ability to capture more in a few well-placed words than most people could imagine in a lifetime. 

posted by Renigade on February 16, 2007 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

oh my...more please!!!!

this is wonderful..coupled with the poem.. I am anxious for more!!

posted by Blue_feathers on February 16, 2007 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Ariel70
You could have done it all in one so we wouldn't have to wait.  I was all absorbed in your story and my mouth was watering for those mushrooms and bacon cooked together.

posted by TAPS. on February 15, 2007 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely remarkable writing!

posted by Troosha on February 15, 2007 at 4:38 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

 

Shan't call you " mistress" in public tho'

posted by ariel70 on February 15, 2007 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

 

Ye, that'll do fineLOL

posted by ariel70 on February 15, 2007 at 2:19 PM | link to this | reply

WHAT ABOUT "MASTER?"

posted by Kabu on February 15, 2007 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

 

Oh, there's no need for that, my dear ; a simple "Sir" now and again will suffice.

 

posted by ariel70 on February 15, 2007 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

I HAVE TO CURTSY TO A TRULY TALENTED WRITER. WOW

posted by Kabu on February 15, 2007 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

mryan

Why, thank you!

When you say you're an author, are you bragging or complaining?LOL

AS Gilbert woulda said, if he'd though of it " A author's lot is not a 'appy one! 'appy one!"

posted by ariel70 on February 15, 2007 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting
Very good description.  Makes me hungry just reading it.

posted by mryan_author on February 15, 2007 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply