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I'm Sorry...
but your story left me a little confused on how they siphoned the money from the account. Maybe you could rewrite and make it a little clearer?
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posted by
Dennison..Mann
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April 8, 2006
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Yes, I enjoyed it too.
posted by
Yasmeen
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December 7, 2002
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Well-written!
I enjoyed the story; the description of the factory was my favorite part, since it felt very real.
In the last paragraph, I really liked the idea of valuable information being printed on the machines. My practical side wonders, though, how did having the account name help him get the money? 
posted by
Humayun
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December 7, 2002
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