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Just the same as the last comment, smiling happily to myself reading & then
wallop!
posted by
CringeintheUSA
on February 14, 2007 at 3:15 PM
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I was taken in
and sailing along....and then...the end. The thud. So sad. Done so well, but so sad.
posted by
mobedder
on February 10, 2007 at 9:41 PM
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Ariel
Very touching poem Children are our world
posted by
Kat02
on February 10, 2007 at 4:31 PM
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Ariel--nicely written--but how sad-tragic-the last lines!
But this is just as a child would ask it. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 10, 2007 at 12:30 PM
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Wonderful insight into a child's mind .Nice poem.
posted by
afzal50
on February 10, 2007 at 9:37 AM
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