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This poem is really interesting, I love the imagery, it's very... what's the word... sparse, in that it doesn't include words that aren't neccessary or pointless phrases. The poem keeps you wondering until the end, not quite sure where it is leading you.
posted by
NightMajik
on February 26, 2007 at 4:44 AM
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 HappyVal 'n' Tim's Day
~ That's an intriguing poem with hidden stories. Hope you have a good day today. |
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 14, 2007 at 4:28 AM
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Excellent...leads the mind to different paths ...
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 12, 2007 at 8:21 AM
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Beautiful pictures painted with difference, the ride on the train, the graffiti flashing by. . . Thank you I enjoyed
posted by
lionladroar
on February 9, 2007 at 10:34 AM
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Very nicely done
posted by
Kat02
on February 9, 2007 at 7:45 AM
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Lovely poem.
posted by
afzal50
on February 9, 2007 at 5:09 AM
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