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Well done!
posted by
Ariala
on February 9, 2007 at 6:46 AM
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Ariel
Wonderful write 
posted by
Kat02
on February 9, 2007 at 6:42 AM
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Very cool....Dr. Seussish. LOL
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on February 8, 2007 at 7:15 PM
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akin to skin
... and yet each of us wears so many metaphorical "skins" -- emotional, intellectual, artistic, political, social, and so on -- like various hats in the closet... newer ones, older ones, comfortable ones, and ones that need dusting...
Thanx for the comment!... After a quick stroll through Wikipedia, "There Alone" indeed bears a foggy resemblance to CDF's Wanderer Above the Sea of Fog...
posted by
xJAYMANx
on February 8, 2007 at 1:58 PM
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Great stanza about the dancing bones round the stones.
A great idea to write these funny, simple but clever poems for youngsters!
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 8, 2007 at 11:12 AM
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Afzal
" Yer wo?"
posted by
ariel70
on February 8, 2007 at 10:23 AM
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It has double meaning of skin.
posted by
afzal50
on February 8, 2007 at 10:03 AM
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