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If you're going to have a "vision", that's a pretty good one to have. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on February 8, 2007 at 9:34 AM
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Your poems have an ethereal feel to them...
Fanciful is the word...Not sure about using the word "golden" twice in the last stanza though.
posted by
Passionflower
on February 7, 2007 at 9:30 PM
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Hello, sailheat
nice poem. keep it up.
posted by
richinstore
on February 7, 2007 at 7:11 PM
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A good style, Sailheat, enjoyable - just watch out for spelling.
(We all do it - no criticism of you.)
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 7, 2007 at 11:40 AM
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It's simple nice.
posted by
afzal50
on February 7, 2007 at 10:28 AM
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