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may keep reading thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on February 7, 2007 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Well....
There are some people who also write fiction stories that will come and read your next chapters...like me!! Keep up the good work - I am intrigued and will be back!

posted by DMWRIGHT on February 7, 2007 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

You seem like a good writer and I DO like the story thus far...

But here on blogit, long pieces of fiction rarely get read. So please don't get discouraged if you dont get many comments. This site is a community of writers. WE exchange info about our lives -- jobs and families.

We usually post our poetry but that's about the only serious writing done around here. You can still learn alot and grow though.

posted by Passionflower on February 6, 2007 at 11:02 PM | link to this | reply