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Brisbane,
sorry, i'm not good at writing poems eventhough i enjoy reading one.
posted by
richinstore
on February 6, 2007 at 7:06 AM
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Hi--lovely-this is my effort--
Her cat-clinging on-with sharpened claws--
hair raised in spikes with fear!
Desperately screaching-"Please witch--pause!"
(In it's heart--"I wish I weren't here!)
posted by
Scramble
on February 6, 2007 at 4:11 AM
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Troosha
Wow.
I'll have a go at illustrating that too!
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on February 5, 2007 at 4:59 PM
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I'll bite...
Brew and potions
left behind on the stove
Wide brimmed hat
and flowing dress still in tow
Drenched by blazing desert sun
No where to hide, no where to run
Magic turning into beads of sweat
Melting mystic pays her debt
posted by
Troosha
on February 5, 2007 at 3:50 PM
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Course, it's all yours, Jo.
Have fun! Yes, the soggy froggies bit lends a bit of humour to it, to make it match with your quite light-hearted tone. The trouble with rhymes is they can direct you certain ways you might not have gone. But it's just a bit of fun. It'd be interesting to add another verse that didn't imitate the same structure quite so closely. Too late now, though!
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 5, 2007 at 2:42 PM
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Fondling frogs and feeling soggy
sounds good for a cartoon to me?
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on February 5, 2007 at 1:28 PM
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Tonyzonit...you're awesome!
Thank you
is it OK if I illustrate this?
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on February 5, 2007 at 1:27 PM
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Sorry, can't do pictures, but I'll add a verse in the same style.
That hat
Belongs to that fat old crone
Sighing in her room
Laughing on Hallows'
Eve at the cross disowned
I suppose it matters she was born
Even though she just pours scorn
Hiding in the night all foggy
Fondling frogs and feeling soggy
posted by
Antonionioni
on February 5, 2007 at 12:29 PM
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