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Your poetry has nice metaphors, MiaElla.
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_Decshak
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January 12, 2007
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nicely done
love the crayon reference
posted by
SoloVale
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January 11, 2007
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How lovely and sad....
posted by
Holy_Grail
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January 11, 2007
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Mia
Powerful poem! I don't believe I have ever read a more descriptive work. Very good!
posted by
bwFrampton
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January 11, 2007
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I agree with Troosha
He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue
Beautiful,
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
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January 11, 2007
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Touching and well-written. Poignant was the word I was searching for.
What a strange word 'poignant' is!
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Antonionioni
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January 11, 2007
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Mia
He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue
Very beautifully said!
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Troosha
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January 11, 2007
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your poem is very beautiful left me speachless to can find the best words..
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the stranger.............najwa
posted by
NAJWA
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January 11, 2007
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Nice work.
posted by
afzal50
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January 11, 2007
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Beautiful work...
posted by
_teddypoet_
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January 11, 2007
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