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Your poetry has nice metaphors, MiaElla.

posted by WindTapper on January 12, 2007 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

nicely done
love the crayon reference

posted by SoloVale on January 11, 2007 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

How lovely and sad....

posted by Holy_Grail on January 11, 2007 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Mia
Powerful poem! I don't believe I have ever read a more descriptive work. Very good!

posted by bwFrampton on January 11, 2007 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Troosha

He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue

 

Beautiful,

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on January 11, 2007 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply

Touching and well-written. Poignant was the word I was searching for.
What a strange word 'poignant' is!

posted by Antonionioni on January 11, 2007 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Mia
He was a crayon
Who couldn’t exist
Inside the lines
So he colored
Everything blue             Very beautifully said!

posted by Troosha on January 11, 2007 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

your poem is very beautiful left me speachless to can find the best words........
the stranger.............najwa

posted by NAJWA on January 11, 2007 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work.

posted by afzal50 on January 11, 2007 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 11, 2007 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

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