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Thank You Mr. Dknowles

That review really helps. We appreciate it, as you know.

posted by cheap-women on October 21, 2003 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

LOL great post

posted by Ariala on October 21, 2003 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

My review

I really like the concept of this. 

(I like the bears and toilet tissue commercial.  I figured the ad execs were sitting around trying to come up with a campaign and someone said, "Is this tissue really soft?" and someone else said "Does a bear shit in the woods?" In simultaneous ecstasy they looked at each other and shouted "THAT'S IT!")

I told you that to get you to rethink the way you approached this piece.  You were almost there.  I would have liked to see you use your unique (and humerous) sense of irony to explain how these fools get here from there. That's where I thought you got kind of flat. 

I've said this before to other bloggers.  Redo this, re-post it and I bet you find your voice, your audience, and a whole lot of grins.

1/2  You can forget the crack about bowling, but I wouldn't sell my ball just yet if I were you.  Just kidding, just kidding.  Hey, its a living.

posted by dknowles on October 21, 2003 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply