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Thanks, Poetic Soldier
I'm no master of haiku. People seem to like them, so I keep posting stuff that looks like haiku -- what I call pseudo-haiku. Thanks for stopping by, and welcome to
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posted by
notapoet
on December 29, 2006 at 7:57 PM
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Tonyzonit
Yes, there is a very good reason for the missing syllable -- I dropped a word on the first line, didn't bother to count syllables (or read it very carefully) when I posted, and repeated the same mistake two more times. In other words, I can't count and I can't proofread worth crap when I'm sleepy. Thanks for pointing out my mistake. It would probably still be there if you hadn't caught it.
posted by
notapoet
on December 29, 2006 at 7:54 PM
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Hi Notty
Is there a syllable missing on purpose from 'Five seven five'? I only say this as an ignoramus - I know nothing about haiku. Other than that question, great stuff.
posted by
Antonionioni
on December 29, 2006 at 9:13 AM
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nomally im not a big fan of haiku...
but i find yours interesting. its definently not my style but i like them, and that is whats makes this place so nice.
posted by
Poetic_Soldier
on December 29, 2006 at 6:07 AM
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