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Beautiful
Very moving! And the graceful Persian script underneath really adds to the feel of the poem.
posted by
Helen_Bach
on January 5, 2007 at 6:42 AM
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shams-i-heartstrong
beautifully expressed.. I like this a lot.
posted by
mneme
on December 28, 2006 at 3:32 AM
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Know such sorrow well. Have spent many long hours, years even, anguishing my inability to sustain the great love of all time, or at least the enchantment of some, oh-you-are-the-one-forever, love. Yet even in the midst of such a love there is the fear of it's ending, as all things do, at best with the death of one of us, My escape from the pain is in practicing non-attachment to the physical plane and focusing on
posted by
sweetlove2old
on December 27, 2006 at 12:34 PM
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Shams
Very sad yet so beautiful I would not change a word 
posted by
Kat02
on December 27, 2006 at 10:14 AM
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Other language is persian.
posted by
afzal50
on December 27, 2006 at 9:39 AM
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Wow...very well done...
Really enjoyed your poem. Is the other language Arabic?
posted by
Passionflower
on December 27, 2006 at 9:01 AM
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