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well done, julia
Good job!
posted by
eponymous
on August 22, 2007 at 9:39 PM
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Superb, Julia...well-done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 14, 2007 at 1:09 AM
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Julia.
posted by
jacentaOld
on July 26, 2007 at 7:06 AM
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thats rough
and tender and hard to forget
posted by
twomany
on July 21, 2007 at 11:47 PM
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this is absolutely beautiful!!!
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 6, 2007 at 1:42 PM
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Oh, Julia, this is heart-wrenching. You're going to make me cry (again).
posted by
Blanche.
on December 10, 2006 at 5:54 PM
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Consummatum est... It is finished.
posted by
Jacta_Alea_Est
on December 9, 2006 at 4:35 AM
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Julia.
Great poem, Julia.
posted by
jacentaOld
on December 7, 2006 at 10:40 PM
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So well written and it always seems finished.
It almost reads like the case of a friend of mine
posted by
Straightforward
on December 1, 2006 at 9:32 AM
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one more time to read you....
posted by
star4sky5
on November 18, 2006 at 6:08 PM
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This poem is beautiful enough. No more editing is required.
posted by
A-and-B
on November 15, 2006 at 4:33 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on November 14, 2006 at 9:06 PM
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I like it just as it is
Continue it is just as it should be
posted by
Kat02
on November 14, 2006 at 4:45 AM
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"trying to chase the cacophonous chatter from my mind." was the strongest line for me. I know that unfinished feeling. I get it with prose also. I think it's very common in the writing world to feel this way. Don't know which writer's quote this is, but someone said: "I don't finish a work, I abandon it."
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on November 14, 2006 at 1:16 AM
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I don't think you should change a thing!
It is beautiful, real, and takes your reader through your love and loss.
posted by
Troosha
on November 13, 2006 at 2:36 PM
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I LIKE IT...
CONTINUE TO CONTINUE...
posted by
FARSAILOR
on November 13, 2006 at 1:03 PM
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You are not the only poet to think this
The Victorian poet Alfred Lord Tennyson was never satisfied with his work, even altering poems after they had appeared in print. Some readers complained that the words they knew and loved had been changed when the poem appeared in another publication.
I like the tenderness in UNFORGETTABLE
posted by
AbsolutelyPositive
on November 13, 2006 at 12:17 PM
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