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well done, julia
Good job!

posted by eponymous on August 22, 2007 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Superb, Julia...well-done!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 14, 2007 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Julia.

posted by jacentaOld on July 26, 2007 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

thats rough
and tender and hard to forget

posted by twomany on July 21, 2007 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

this is absolutely beautiful!!!

posted by Blue_feathers on January 6, 2007 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, Julia, this is heart-wrenching. You're going to make me cry (again).

posted by Blanche. on December 10, 2006 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

Consummatum est... It is finished.

posted by Jacta_Alea_Est on December 9, 2006 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply

Julia.
Great poem, Julia.

posted by jacentaOld on December 7, 2006 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

So well written and it always seems finished.
It almost reads like the case of a  friend of mine

posted by Straightforward on December 1, 2006 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

one more time to read you....

posted by star4sky5 on November 18, 2006 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is beautiful enough. No more editing is required.

 


posted by A-and-B on November 15, 2006 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on November 14, 2006 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

I like it just as it is
Continue it is just as it should be 

posted by Kat02 on November 14, 2006 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

"trying to chase the cacophonous chatter from my mind." was the strongest line for me. I know that unfinished feeling. I get it with prose also. I think it's very common in the writing world to feel this way. Don't know which writer's quote this is, but someone said: "I don't finish a work, I abandon it."

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on November 14, 2006 at 1:16 AM | link to this | reply

I don't think you should change a thing!
It is beautiful, real, and takes your reader through your love and loss.

posted by Troosha on November 13, 2006 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

I LIKE IT...
CONTINUE TO CONTINUE...

posted by FARSAILOR on November 13, 2006 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

You are not the only poet to think this
The Victorian poet Alfred Lord Tennyson was never satisfied with his work, even altering poems after they had appeared in print. Some readers complained that the words they knew and loved had been changed when the poem appeared in another publication.

I like the tenderness in UNFORGETTABLE

posted by AbsolutelyPositive on November 13, 2006 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply