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well done, julia
Good job!
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eponymous
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August 22, 2007
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Superb, Julia...well-done!
posted by
teddypoet_
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August 14, 2007
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Julia.
posted by
jacenta
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July 26, 2007
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thats rough
and tender and hard to forget
posted by
twomany
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July 21, 2007
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this is absolutely beautiful!!!
posted by
OTA.
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January 6, 2007
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Oh, Julia, this is heart-wrenching. You're going to make me cry (again).
posted by
Blanche.
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December 10, 2006
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Consummatum est... It is finished.
posted by
Jacta_Alea_Est
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December 9, 2006
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Julia.
Great poem, Julia.
posted by
jacenta
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December 7, 2006
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So well written and it always seems finished.
It almost reads like the case of a friend of mine
posted by
Straightforward
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December 1, 2006
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one more time to read you....
posted by
star4sky5
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November 18, 2006
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This poem is beautiful enough. No more editing is required.
posted by
A-and-B
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November 15, 2006
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
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November 14, 2006
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I like it just as it is
Continue it is just as it should be
posted by
Kat02
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November 14, 2006
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"trying to chase the cacophonous chatter from my mind." was the strongest line for me. I know that unfinished feeling. I get it with prose also. I think it's very common in the writing world to feel this way. Don't know which writer's quote this is, but someone said: "I don't finish a work, I abandon it."
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
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November 14, 2006
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I don't think you should change a thing!
It is beautiful, real, and takes your reader through your love and loss.
posted by
Troosha
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November 13, 2006
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I LIKE IT...
CONTINUE TO CONTINUE...
posted by
FARSAILOR
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November 13, 2006
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You are not the only poet to think this
The Victorian poet Alfred Lord Tennyson was never satisfied with his work, even altering poems after they had appeared in print. Some readers complained that the words they knew and loved had been changed when the poem appeared in another publication.
I like the tenderness in UNFORGETTABLE
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AbsolutelyPositive
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November 13, 2006
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