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Reaching for thought

is like casting a net into the vastness of the sea, isn't it?   Nicely done!

posted by Troosha on November 8, 2006 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

STER;LING POEM

I enjoyed this poem, thank you.

posted by FARSAILOR on November 7, 2006 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

ypundy

your words are welcome and are taken as honest and instructive. I am interested in how someone reacts to my choice of words, and I am hear to learn as much as to share. In this case this poem kind of wrote itself but I think I chose abort because I was speaking of a storm, a jarring, and unexpected storm, with its turbulance. Prior to that it was a completely different feel. Thanks for the beautiful pictures.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on November 6, 2006 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

R kind visit opened my eyes 2 R gr8 poetry.One idea- use synonym4 'aborted'

For me it jarred. Took away from the ambience...and reflective instruction. That word is so loaded, it seemed like a judgement (though I might agree it is, I cry at times for dead sons and daughters, murdered by their protectors, for shortlived needs and pleasure). But in a democracy, theocracy might argue its way ahead slowly, never use dogma as political fact and demand. Shalom Friend; forgive my words if they are too many, too soon. Shalom from Neil

   

posted by salem8 on November 6, 2006 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward

strange huh? i can't tell you what it means, only what it felt like flowing thru me. Thanks for visiting.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on November 6, 2006 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

I simply like the imagery here

posted by Straightforward on November 6, 2006 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply