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Hi MysticGmekeepr

Deep thoughts dived for and brought to the surface, like rare pearls for you readers. Well wrote mam. Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

Mystic, I love that middle of the night, twilight sleep-waking state for

receiving inspiration. You got a gem here!

posted by Blanche. on October 14, 2006 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks RI

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Mysteria

Hey thanks for stopping by little trooper. I'll take that freightcar full of love and say thank you very much.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

sweet symphony

thanks so much for your faithful reading of my "stuff". I'm glad you like it.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

avant

you know what i'm doing even when I don't :-)

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

thank you Mr. Teddypoet

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

and you are so right

there is a world of difference between passive and receptive....passive allows something to be done to , receptive is participating in the act of receiving.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

blanche

thats just the way my weird brain plays with words i guess. words are very erotic I think.....and what could be hotter than a "recepticle for the sacred"? I was just lying there in bed next to my sleeping husband and thats what came, I rolled over and wrote it down...blame the night muse

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

thanks P Flower

I did too, kind of :-) but I always try to refer to the dictionary lest I show my lack of education and you guys gong me

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 12, 2006 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

mystic..no fancy words, but just..."great work"...as always..:)

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posted by Rumored on October 12, 2006 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

MysticGmekeepr juss dropping off a freightcar full o LoVe!!!!

Thanks so much for your poetry and also for your inspiring words you send me in my blog (((((MysticGmekeepr)))))

posted by mysteria on October 12, 2006 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

excellent done as always....

posted by _Symphony_ on October 12, 2006 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Mystic

I like your eldritch use of language. Great work!

posted by avant-garde on October 12, 2006 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

MysticG, wonderful as ever...

 

posted by teddypoet_ on October 11, 2006 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

MysticGmekpr, you have the most delightful blend of erotic language

You make even "sepulcher" a hot word (and I never would have thought that I'd say that in a million years!)  Open and receptive, not passive, as the female and feminine principle are so often represented.  I was exchanging notes with Avant on the nuances of difference between the two, passive and receptive, as applied to the feminine or yin principle.

Somehow, "passive" has never set well with me, but "receptive" does, and when I looked it up, it clicked: Passive by definition, means "without will, or acted upon". "receptive" means open to receiving, surrendering one's will, freely to man or God, there's a huge difference in the two.

A woman is not a block of clay or wood for man or God to act upon, and all seekers of the divine, receive God by being "receptive", not without will, because to love, freely, and of one's own free will, is the only true love that even God aspires to. 

posted by Blanche. on October 11, 2006 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

Quite eerie work here.

But enjoyable....I did know what 'sepulcher' meant too.

posted by Passionflower on October 11, 2006 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply

troosha

...and I must confess I looked it up before I used it..."a recepticle for sacred relics, to place into" Seemed to be what I was reaching for.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 11, 2006 at 4:27 PM | link to this | reply

thank you najwa

posted by MysticGmekeepr on October 11, 2006 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

I confess I had to look up sepulcher. Having done that, your poem took on a dark and foreboding shape. You do, however, indicate you are ready and willing for the darkness to lift so there’s the yin/yang of the piece. Well done!

posted by Troosha on October 11, 2006 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

SOFT SLEEPY LOVELY BEATIFULL REAL.......najwa

posted by NAJWA on October 11, 2006 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply