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superbly written, very soulful.
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marieclaire66
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October 7, 2006
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MysticGmekeepr
An astoundingly lovely poem, in thankfulness for someone, now no more, but is ever alive in memory.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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October 6, 2006
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Wow.....so deep and powerful.....work!
posted by
_Symphony_
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October 6, 2006
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Heart moving and eloquently expressed Mystic
posted by
katray4
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October 5, 2006
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MysticGmekeepr
That was so beautiful and expressive, I'm so happy you're writing here again luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
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October 5, 2006
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Thanks for explaining who Distal was.
It really brought more meaning to the poem...enjoyed this so much.
posted by
Passionflower
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October 5, 2006
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Excellent; deep as ever...
posted by
teddypoet_
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October 5, 2006
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Troosha
Distal was my Mom's housekeeper. she came to work for us when I was 3 and came regularly until i was 23, when my mom got foreclosed on after my fathers untimely death.
Distal was very special in my young life and I have wanted to write a poem for her for some time...that just seemed to come today. Shes been dead for many yeasrstoo. thanks for reading me
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
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October 5, 2006
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noncomformist
pretty deep huh?:-) thanks for journeying there with me
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
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October 5, 2006
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Phewww......
That was gripping story of acceptance, emergence, and dark secrets. Must have been cathartic to write. Very well done!
posted by
Troosha
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October 5, 2006
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What a deep poem, very well written!
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nonconformist
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October 5, 2006
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