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Excellent real life humour, great poem Tony, Loved it
posted by
lionladroar
on September 21, 2006 at 11:59 AM
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Thanks all!
I'm now, after a bottle of beer, going to attempt a new one!
posted by
Antonionioni
on September 20, 2006 at 12:56 PM
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Top-notch!
Yeah, that last line's a killer. Sort of adds pungency to a sweet verse ... don't you love pickles? They're kinda sour, but boy, do they add flavor to a big, fat sandwich!
posted by
Rarmcwa
on September 20, 2006 at 9:20 AM
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Bravo!
posted by
shelly_b
on September 19, 2006 at 4:58 PM
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I love it!
Must read some more, I nearly forgot to come back. Good job I added you to my people list!
posted by
nonconformist
on September 19, 2006 at 1:46 PM
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Love the last line, tonysonit.
posted by
saul_relative
on September 19, 2006 at 1:36 PM
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