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Ariel, I scrolled back and forth, first to get the plot, and the characters
then to go back and savor the gist of it: a story within a story, with as many layers as Isabel's pearl of knowledge. (A beautiful image, I like that one).
posted by
Blanche.
on September 13, 2006 at 5:09 PM
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I love the frame of your story,
and the fluid turns it takes. Very readable. Also love the Spanish words built into the sentences and that you don't write a translation. It is all very clear and lucid. Gracias... :)
posted by
Pat_B
on September 13, 2006 at 11:59 AM
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ariel
what many-mirrored beauty...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 13, 2006 at 11:41 AM
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Another delicious dish prepared by our master chef
posted by
SuccessWarrior
on September 13, 2006 at 9:49 AM
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