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One Tin soldier
Interesting story, Jim. I read many new authors. I notice many new writers scribe first person.
I learned if one writes a long piece, first person loses punch. --That's only my opinion.
But your piece is very good. I like it.
The Listener
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The-listener
on September 3, 2006 at 7:28 AM
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