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good post
I enjoyed your poetry I will be back to read more
posted by
Kat02
on August 23, 2006 at 11:33 AM
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Clever, playful, and a little eccentric (as usual).
posted by
Troosha
on August 23, 2006 at 9:10 AM
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penguinrock26
I wish I could understand poetry that does not make sense to me.
Understand, I said to me , which is not a critique of your words.
Matter of fact, with that thought of my lack of knowledge of poetry in my mind, I have now purchased Poetry for Dummies.-;)
However, in your poem here, thius really caught my mind up;
'Till the tremor
Registers the brain'
So, perhaps there is hope for this mechanc's mind my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 23, 2006 at 8:55 AM
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