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If Ypundys
Misspelled word no commas here no exclamation marks no questions marks then that makes me worse then him )LOL) but I only went to the 8th grade
posted by
Kat02
on August 23, 2006 at 11:44 AM
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Good for a chuckle......
posted by
Troosha
on August 23, 2006 at 9:25 AM
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cute
posted by
Root05
on August 23, 2006 at 6:34 AM
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Hahahahahahahhahahhaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very funnnnny!
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 23, 2006 at 12:10 AM
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swift
Call me stupid but I understood every word you wrote! Figures~lol
posted by
Offy
on August 22, 2006 at 7:38 PM
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HAHAHA! EROORS IS SPELLED ERRORS! BUT GOOD WRITE ANYWAY.
You are coming along nicely, my friend, and I will admit that for some reason, perhaps young at heart, I really do use a lot of exclamations marks. Thanks for the heads up. I'm selfconcious now!
posted by
swftfox
on August 22, 2006 at 5:42 PM
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Beware Dr Dandelion-tooth of Lion born in Aug -not the very last day Virgin
short poetic response:
My poems are clean
typing eroors there are none
they make you serene
don't spoil the fun
my comments are hurried
but you do understand
you are so worried
you wrote: "Grammar does not understand" Ypun the Man
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 22, 2006 at 4:59 PM
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