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posted by
WindTapper
on August 18, 2006 at 4:13 AM
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"True Love" was truly inspired!...My favorite one...
posted by
muser
on August 18, 2006 at 3:14 AM
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 17, 2006 at 4:38 PM
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I enjoyed "True Love"
It was crisp and gentle all at the same time. I seem to be out of sync with when people post and read (I write when the sun is rising) ) so if you feel so inclined, I invite you to read my morning poem - Link to: Finding You, Finding Me
posted by
Troosha
on August 17, 2006 at 8:46 AM
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Thanks to all! CeeMarie! Want to laugh?
This morning at your suggestion, I did a web search to see what the parameters of a foxtrane are! Nothing came up. So I searched poetry styles and definitions and again, nothing. So I began to write you an email to ask for any info you might have on this style of poetry. Guess what color my brain dead face is now that I realize just exactly what a "foxtrane" is! hahahahahahahahahahaa I believe I shall use that very name for this style with the slight change to give it identity next to quatrains! I shall call it foxtrains 'til further notice of this style actually existing somewhere else and I shall continue to advance it's acceptance to the poetic community!
posted by
swftfox
on August 17, 2006 at 8:05 AM
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Not sure but sounds interesting
posted by
dimondj2
on August 17, 2006 at 4:45 AM
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Dave-
I liked it, it's a Foxtrane
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on August 17, 2006 at 4:25 AM
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not a bad effort, I sound like a teacher....
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 16, 2006 at 11:58 PM
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Yep! Rev 'er up and back 'er down! But what the hell is it? Mine?
posted by
swftfox
on August 16, 2006 at 8:26 PM
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It's like a pick up and a tapering off
posted by
Straightforward
on August 16, 2006 at 7:41 PM
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