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Thank you Mari-am. It is always a pleasure to see you here!
Thank you for your comments! Soon i hope to do some brush painting. What do they call it in Japan? Karagi? or something like that. When I have one I am happy with iwill post it with haiku!
posted by
swftfox
on August 14, 2006 at 10:17 AM
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i love your words " Face to reality "
posted by
Rosetree
on August 14, 2006 at 6:10 AM
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Well-done. Might be edited later and publsihed. Great message
I am guessing now---publishers are looking for one or two original combination of words per poem before they publish. One recent Poet Laureatte of USA said something like "the metallic cry of the seagulls". That's original. And Marieclaire has some of these too...only my effort to offer compliments and supplements--shalom
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ILLUMINATI8
on August 12, 2006 at 4:25 PM
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Well-done. Might be edited later and publsihed. Great message
I am guessing now---publishers are looking for one or two original combination of words per poem before they publish. One recent Poet Laureatte of USA said something like "the metallic cry of the seagulls". That's original. And Marieclaire has some of these too...only my effort to offer compliments and supplements--shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 12, 2006 at 4:24 PM
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I read this again, it is very well written,
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 12, 2006 at 2:43 PM
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Dave
Beautifully written
posted by
Kat02
on August 12, 2006 at 11:35 AM
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interesting message...
does imagination ever fill the gaps in life though?
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 11, 2006 at 10:53 PM
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