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Terrific Ending
May it gently move you to that better place. You're very open, which makes me really feel that you're heading in the right direction (+ it makes you a very good poet). If I may, I might suggest thinking of a specific incidence in your life that demonstrates this direction so that you're showing more than telling, but even so, this is all very strong. You create a terrific sense of cadence with the bold-faced words in the beginning, for example.
Whatever happens, keep writing. You're onto something. 
--Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"
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TallAndSkinnyPoet
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August 8, 2006
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Your experience of utmost pain and torment is turned into a message of encouragement. To suffer through horror and to give courage through the example of the way you face the future is the beauty of an elevated soul. Thank you. 
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chitravathi_moon
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August 8, 2006
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