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- Go to okay Marie, here we go again. Is this one better for memories?
poetjb this is great as it is!
I see you incorporated some of my suggestions, I feel honored, good for the ego Ha Ha! hopefully not at your expense. I would like someone to help me edit, reshape my poems, but I really don't know where to start, can you help, I am prepared to pay, or join a course, may be you know what level I am at. I think I have got the basics and the ideas, the missing ingredients are rythms and structures, the ideas images are there. Just a little tightening up and ruthless pruning needed. I do as much as I can by myself but i think I can only go so far withoug outside help. So any suggestions welcome, also I am not very good at doing what I am told... just a friendly warning, but I do listen eventually....
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marieclaire66
on August 5, 2006 at 2:02 AM
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poetjpb
What happens to the course if you go bcak to teaching full time luv?
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 4, 2006 at 8:24 PM
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