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Straightforward, well-done...
posted by
_teddypoet_
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August 29, 2006
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Yes, YPunday u can feel free to give me the suggestion regarding line 1
posted by
Straightforward
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August 6, 2006
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Agreed--u covered a lot of ground in this short poem?
I have one suggestion about line 1...whenever u are in the mood to ask. Otherwise, I don't tinker with poems unless the spelling is atrocious (which will never be aproblem for you, from India, I guess). Shalom/Shanthi Aum/Amen
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
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August 4, 2006
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Such a short poem
but it travels from joyful beginning to sorrow so effectively.
posted by
Troosha
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July 30, 2006
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Good account of life .
posted by
afzal50
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July 29, 2006
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