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I love the idea of a memoir
However many of my memories are disturbing, so unless there is some humor, it won't attract anyone.
posted by
Hadley-Madison
on August 6, 2006 at 2:08 PM
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how about squeeze the writing juices within you
ummmmmmmmm..................Now I am beginning to hate the image
posted by
poetjpb
on August 4, 2006 at 4:42 PM
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Marie--you have a lot of good ideas-thanks
Oh and my ego is okay really----I always strive to improve
posted by
poetjpb
on August 4, 2006 at 3:39 PM
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I guess the classes are for-profit, not gratis. I may have registered last
but I am too busy to pay, not too busy to play, and i thank you for your serious appraoch to, and contributions toward, better writing. Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 30, 2006 at 4:05 PM
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Hi again, the wicked witch! read my feedback on your post.
column about nothing. brace yourself, it is ruthless, no just kidding.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 29, 2006 at 10:17 PM
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poetjpb
Well, if we can listen, that's when it all gets so good. I know that Azur did that for me, it was a joy to actually see what she did after my butcherly writing was complete. lol
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 28, 2006 at 9:32 PM
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Yes much better! sorry if I sounded so critical. You asked for feedback.
one little thing, free writing juices does not sit well with me, you are mixing two images here, one is abstract, free and concrete juices, the two images are at odds with each other.
How about, release writing juices, or let the writing juices flow freely, that is assuming people have writing juices in the first places! They might be as dry as a bone, just kidding. sorry I bruised your ego, it was not intentional. I am not saying I would do any better than you probably not. It is easy to sit and pontificate and criticize others, it might make someone feel important but really, that is not what it is all about. When you write you put yourself out there, it is a risk you take, and I never like to really say what I think, I would offend too many people! Not I mean to, but I can very critical especially with my own work. Feel free to pick holes in what I write, my ego should handle it, well it should.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 28, 2006 at 8:40 PM
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