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Thanks for th Spring haiku tonight Dave;no other theme until MC speaks 7/25
Rest up buddy--hang in there. I will look at your MS (manuscript) and say soemthing tomorrow. I'm sure they are good haiku (better than my spring onions)

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 24, 2006 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

We WANT DAVE, WE WANT DAVE! Haiku Corner calls for David Dunham! Yohoooo
Okay Dave...I won;t stop hollerin' until you show up or kiss someone nice on Haiku Corner

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 24, 2006 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Shalom Dave Dunham. Benedictiosn you way! What is this we hear about tonite
is anight without you and your haiku? Did I offend you...not enough clicks---I know you deserve more than I can send your way...but I'm gonna try

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 24, 2006 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

nah! If I go down (interesting choice of words) just throw some dirt
over me and leave me lay! Read our water haiku's! If I die at least I hope I become water for daisies!

posted by swftfox on July 23, 2006 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Shall I call a nurse--or is Marieclaire nearby to render first aid. Or MMR
mouth to mouth resuscitation

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 23, 2006 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

Yeah, whatever, I'm just calming down because I'm freaking exhausted!
went to bed last night at 2 a.m. and woke up at 7:30 with a wild idea for a money making project. Of course couldn't sleep after that so I got up. Now I'm near to collapse!

posted by swftfox on July 23, 2006 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

Nice to see you two kids playing catch again. Last night u were crazy
Glad everyone is settling down after the Sabbath and messages--shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 23, 2006 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Ypunday! Nice to see you. You too sweet Marie!
As we speak I am printing a rough draft of my book "Droplets Of My Soul" I have enough haiku/senyru to put together at least three more books. We'll see how this goes!

posted by swftfox on July 23, 2006 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

You covered eberything-fr cowboys& boots to Christ's Return & necklace
It is quite pleasing to see you have so much fun with this form, Dave. Glad you salvaged some of the lost work. Shalom

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 23, 2006 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

let us go then! get the fire going!

posted by marieclaire66 on July 22, 2006 at 8:54 PM | link to this | reply

Dang! You sound like just the kind of mountain woman I'd like to cuddle up
with in front of the fire in my log cabin on a cold snowy night with some beaver stew (No pun intended) and my stout homemade wine! Whoo Whee! Lets go!

posted by swftfox on July 22, 2006 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

you have'nt managed to put me off my lunch yet..
It's snake stew and sweet potatoes with great lashings of spider sauce and worm spaghetti bol. You wanna share?

posted by marieclaire66 on July 22, 2006 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

some really good stuff in there. some funny some scary.
Come to NZ there are no snakes to bite your bum but we do have mighty tarentulas!

posted by marieclaire66 on July 22, 2006 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

HEE HEE! ME TOO! MY GRANDFATHER SEEMED TO BE A BLACK SNAKE MAGNET

posted by swftfox on July 22, 2006 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

These are great, Dave.  So varied.  I got a big kick out of the blacksnake haiku being as how I've known a lot of old farmers.

posted by TAPS. on July 22, 2006 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Ariala, I think my keen idiot savant mind re-captured most of them.

posted by swftfox on July 22, 2006 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

Bravo!! Sorry you lost your first batch though!

posted by Ariala on July 22, 2006 at 3:59 PM | link to this | reply