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posted by
Kat02
on July 26, 2006 at 12:24 AM
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wonderful verse
it all rhymed very well. nicely done!
posted by
microba
on July 23, 2006 at 8:08 AM
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I may have put that indelicately THELONELYROAD- (LATE&HATE rhyme)
there are worse situations than the one we are in anyday! Think your way out of the depths---no one has failed like the leaders of America and the Mideast since 2001. First they let horrors occur on 9-11, and there's been outright human rights violations and killings since. WHATEVER YOU ARE FELLING UNSUCCESSFUL ABOUT, YOU have not taken actions to kill thousands of people and cause millions of $$ worth of damage now, and into the next generations who had hoped for better... CHIN UP, man!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 22, 2006 at 2:29 PM
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I was with you all the way until the last line; was it to rhyme-your "hate"
Good poem. But as I said, given your sensitive role at work and your technical prowess, you do use power for good or evil. After all, almost evry industry in the US & most pension funds depend on exploitation of poor countries and the sale of military products. It's the real world--but we can dream of better...Shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 22, 2006 at 2:00 PM
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I hope you are just talking creative license here, because I happen
to think you're a really good guy, relative or not. I love you, man, and I wish you were here. You need to be around people who love you!! Take care, and hey....call sometime!
posted by
Schatz
on July 22, 2006 at 12:01 PM
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Never too late thelonelyroad...
Redemption always closer than first appears.
posted by
Katray2
on July 22, 2006 at 3:26 AM
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Good poem.
posted by
afzal50
on July 21, 2006 at 9:10 PM
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