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Hi there guys. Nice limo (for me?)
had to read this one again for the highs and the lows
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 21, 2006 at 2:43 PM
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woohooo!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 20, 2006 at 11:39 PM
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I believe I could allow you to come!
posted by
swftfox
on July 20, 2006 at 11:30 PM
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can I come too?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 20, 2006 at 11:29 PM
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Oh baby! I'm on the way to the moon!
posted by
swftfox
on July 20, 2006 at 11:09 PM
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those verses are irresistible! Teaser....
well it is flowing flowing flowing flying How high can you get?
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 20, 2006 at 11:05 PM
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Well, pout, pout, o.k. but just a quick one and don't tell Marie!
I think she wonders about me as it is!
posted by
swftfox
on July 20, 2006 at 9:10 PM
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Now it's my turn to say "Thank You. So sweet & kind.Thank you.No,no thankU"
Acrually, i can see how wonderful your rhyming skills are. Bravao! And they appear mostly natural and unforced. Some people try hard, and for the reader a sense of forced rhymes come through the poem,. Not here. ALTHOUGH, a few of the lines are old-fashioned in construction. (Hope u r not getting old-fashioned on me Pops). There now, I succeeded in making you smile and frown and curse -all in one minute. Sorry mate!
c'mon give me a hug. PLEASEEEe
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 20, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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