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hahaha great poem - short and to the point...
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 17, 2006 at 10:41 AM
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thanks for the dubious offer....
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 16, 2006 at 5:56 PM
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thing dubious, Marie my dear, don't worry about it! I'll be there for you!
posted by
swftfox
on July 16, 2006 at 4:00 PM
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lol. nice
posted by
thelonelyroad
on July 16, 2006 at 2:04 PM
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what's the prematurity about? sounds dubious....
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 16, 2006 at 12:58 PM
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WOW! with practice I think you could get there from here!
Change Profoundity to Ypundayty adn you'll crack me up! lol
posted by
swftfox
on July 16, 2006 at 4:49 AM
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See U can do it, buddy.Just put your hand in your mouth after 4 lines, LOL
Good one Dave.
I knew I could write a short poem
with brevity and profoundity
I practised on haiku at Dave's home
'til Marie carried me away from such pre-maturity
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 16, 2006 at 3:23 AM
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I like it... Thanks. :)
posted by
BlackPearl1
on July 15, 2006 at 5:37 PM
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Hey Shelley and Marie! Howdy Doody!
Thanks for the comments! I don't know why I don't write shorter poems. It is way easier. But I have so much to say. Has anyone noticed? hahaha
posted by
swftfox
on July 15, 2006 at 2:21 PM
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That's the spirit! short sharp and to the point!
thanks for the email. Keep your chin up. Reply in a while, need to think a bit, keep things under control you know.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 15, 2006 at 1:50 PM
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LOL, cute!
posted by
shelly_b
on July 15, 2006 at 1:46 PM
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