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Oh my God! hahaha quit with the pictures already! hahahaha
Write to her, but in the interest of international relationships, I would steer clear of any discussions concerning my last poem and it's origin! Perhaps to focus on her art and start there and get a feel, well, o.k. poor choice of words there, get an understanding of where she is! Go from there. No feeling anything, K? lol
posted by
swftfox
on July 15, 2006 at 11:08 AM
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Dave, I'm afraid to email Inga. I might celebrate areas I know nothing of
but your detailed description have made them close and very real. I know where to turn, salivate ---oH , i need to stop. Good writing; comes alive. Throbbing, I should say
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 15, 2006 at 10:54 AM
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YES, it sounds like you need to relax, calm down, regroup and
all the other corny things people say when they want to help but don't know what to say! Relax, take it easy and re-read some of my recent poetry!
posted by
swftfox
on July 13, 2006 at 11:39 PM
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Well, my life is a disaster area...Once bitten twice shy as they say.
better alone than with the wrong person. All my friends are getting remarried, it sucks! Well I am too good for anyone right now. Ha Ha. I just want to keep out of trouble, while inviting it. My friends keep their beady eyes on me, since I had that crush on that French photographer not so long ago. I am over that one. Phew! Never again! Waste of energy. No, no mischief for me! The ex lives just around the corner, rarely seem him though. Oh speaking of which bumped into that other German idiot, mistake number two. I think I'll right here.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 13, 2006 at 11:33 PM
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Memory lane, yes, torture, yes, chin up? sometimes,
Naughty thoughts? slip out on occasion but only if they are welcome, otherwise, if known to me, I repress them. One of life's most eagerly sought treasures, was 1. True eternal awe inspiring love, 2. a bedmate to match me. Appears I have found neither. Ever.
posted by
swftfox
on July 13, 2006 at 11:20 PM
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Uh, don't know what to say. Thanks for the invite... truly it was tasteful,
I cannot stand porn it is a right turn off, but you got the right balance here. Are you going down memory lane, must be torture. Keep your chin up, and those naughty thoughts to yourself.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 13, 2006 at 11:12 PM
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Thank you. It is hard for me to read. Fond memories I guess, but
I didn't really want to start writing porn, well, I mean, I shouldn't....and wouldn't.....and well, Marie, feel free to visit me anytime!
posted by
swftfox
on July 13, 2006 at 8:35 PM
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Very swift, Nicefox. Very tastefully done. Lovely.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 13, 2006 at 8:28 PM
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OOOOh AAAAAAAAAAh! beautifully sensuous but still tasteful.
It does not "bare" thinking about such things. Dave lock your doors! Just in case, you get some unexpected visitations..... Don't worry about me, I cannot swim so....
truly, it is a lovely poem tied in with the "song" of passion. Booooootiful!
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 13, 2006 at 8:25 PM
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Well, well, well! You delivered on that steamy promise Dave. Fur and all--
where has your adventurous tongue not traveled. O hope the respectful ladies three that grace our haiku do not experiment with these forbidden lava flows. Cheers--send it in--win win something, definitely!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 13, 2006 at 5:01 PM
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