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great collection
of fatherly love!  The first haiku is my favourite - everything about it is just damn good!

posted by markng on July 9, 2006 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Inspired! Dave, when you say u are on a roll, man! You are on a roll.
Super work; it's such a pleasure to combine the light, color and words you offer us, almosy daily. So, don't you go on long trips,Dave. OK, if you do, be the swiftfox u r, and return swiftly. Blogit needs U!  

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 9, 2006 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

HI DAVE WHY YOU JUST STOP BY MY SONGS AND PUT YOUR GOLDEN SIGHNETURE FOR ME I WILL BE SO HAPPY

posted by NAJWA on July 9, 2006 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

Swftfox, I like the way that you use several haiku to make a whole story.

posted by TAPS. on July 9, 2006 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

swft,
these are great! And I admire your productivity as well...

posted by Nautikos on July 9, 2006 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on July 9, 2006 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Najwa! You are so kind!
 I do my best!

posted by swftfox on July 9, 2006 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

I BELIEVE YOU ARE GREAT FATHER AND GREAT LOVER TOO

posted by NAJWA on July 9, 2006 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply