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Why, thank you!
Tinker I shall!
posted by
WriterofLight
on July 9, 2006 at 7:57 PM
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Quite like it, the tension in the poem works well.
the occasional awkward patch does not detract from the overall effect. With a little tinkering, it would not take much to improve and make it perfect, to my liking anyway.
posted by
marieclaire66
on July 8, 2006 at 5:54 PM
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