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Gr8 verse. keep blogging!

posted by Sabsline on June 23, 2006 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

Last night it rained hard

I went with the general feeling of appreciating the fresh start, the clean morning air; but I have had a tough week (TOUGH WEAK would be an oxymoron) but it was no harder than anyone else's. I celebrate, and give thanks, for the many wonderful moments with friends and family here and abroad. I got a chance to call South Africa, after factoring oin time changes/zones and staying up past midnight to get the "birthday girl" there in the morning hours. Take care-=- and muchas gracias/moto gratzia.

posted by salem8 on June 23, 2006 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply

Whose tears might those be? Its generally assumed that the cloud cries. Another 2 clicks here. Thanks.

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posted by A-and-B on June 23, 2006 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

Great...

...comparison with humans.  Sometimes we have more than 24 hours worth of tears...

Excellent word choice, keep it coming!    --Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"

posted by TallAndSkinnyPoet on June 23, 2006 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

I found it strange when I discovered that. Then...

I found out people prefer dry weather on weekends so that their hair, or dressing will be scant or light. So, there are reasons for people's strange and inherent preferences.rights, idiosyncracies. In my haiku, I tried to avoid punctuation, but I used color to show my attitude/real feelings for a new set of 24 hours given us each morning. Take care--keep on keeping on! YPUN

posted by salem8 on June 23, 2006 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

Some people are actually depressed during rainy days. Lol.

posted by A-and-B on June 23, 2006 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Top of the morning to you SWFTFOX, and BlogitVille-agers

Thanks SWFTFOX for sampling my haiku---who knows they may become daily breakfast fare. Take care!

posted by salem8 on June 23, 2006 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Thought provoking! Nice job! I see you putting some real effort here!

posted by swftfox on June 23, 2006 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply