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posted by markng on June 21, 2006 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

Perhaps I was trying to include too much in a haiku...
SHALOM> Thanks for reading and sharing. I believe we started in eternal life (or Garden of Eden) but our human lives are a mix of light and darkness; great heroism and great cowardice, malfesance and bloodletting. The darkness does not win, but it can be much to bear at times. Hope that helps...YPUN

posted by salem8 on June 20, 2006 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

enjoyable

posted by brisbane_artist on June 20, 2006 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Nice write! You said a lot in those three little lines.
It is a little obscure, but so is most art! Thanks for sharing.

posted by swftfox on June 20, 2006 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply

Hmm...not sure I get this one...but it flows nicely.

posted by Passionflower on June 20, 2006 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

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