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hey Tom

posted by star4sky5 on September 25, 2006 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Frankenkitty
When it comes to sex, we are whatever the other wants. As for roller derby, be sexy out there and them turn into a tiger.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 22, 2006 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Taps
I got your heart racing?? Had to have a drink and sit down...little light headed? Its great to be alive!

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 22, 2006 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

bel 1965
I couldn't find mainstream if I tried. I'm a perfect misfit.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 22, 2006 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply


posted by A-and-B on June 21, 2006 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

She sounds
like a Demonatrix!  Great erotic story.  First roller derby practice is tonight. I hope I don't break anything. Take care

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on June 21, 2006 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by TAPS. on June 21, 2006 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

I like what many might call
edgy works.  Fear is an amazing aphrodisiac (not sure on the spelling there).  I like dark, I like something way outside of the mainstream.  I wish there were more writer's such as yourself.

posted by bel_1965 on June 21, 2006 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

astraldreamer
Thanks for reading and commenting

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 21, 2006 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Ann
 time to write another story but on what?

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 21, 2006 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

bel 1965
Thanks, whenever you write something you wonder if it will go over or sink....

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 21, 2006 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

Goodness
My heart is beating pretty fast after THAT post. I think you have certainly tried something different with good effect!

posted by astraldreamer on June 21, 2006 at 12:36 AM | link to this | reply


posted by A-and-B on June 20, 2006 at 2:39 PM | link to this | reply

Most men dont complain about being devoured this way!

posted by Passionflower on June 20, 2006 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin
You did that all very well.  There is nothing like the rush one gets from those factors when they are all combined.  Oh geez, I am panting now, I better get out of here!  Again and as always you have thrilled your audience!

posted by bel_1965 on June 20, 2006 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Poetink
Yeah, I'm experimenting with combinations.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 20, 2006 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

bel 1965
I tried to combine the elements of sex and fear, poiunding of the heart, wanting to yell out, holding ones breath. 

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 20, 2006 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony
 + =

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 20, 2006 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Ann
I guess that its sort of a love story.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 20, 2006 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

seduction....
It's art and prey...hmmm???

posted by PoeticInk on June 20, 2006 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very erotic
Now I know what goes through the mind of a man as he fantasizes.  Very interesting.....

posted by bel_1965 on June 20, 2006 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

ooooh ah!

posted by _Symphony_ on June 20, 2006 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Love story!

posted by A-and-B on June 20, 2006 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply