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Excellent Theme, Ending
Very strong work, you add some valuable comments to an important theme - enjoying the moment. The rain analogy might be a little overused in poetry, but I'm certainly no expert.
What I also liked was the various stanza and line styles and lengths.
The ending works very well in my opinion. 
--Shawn, "Tall and Skinny Poet"
posted by
TallAndSkinnyPoet
on June 19, 2006 at 3:14 PM
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