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Frankenkitty

yeah, I kinda went on a booze writing kick Haven't done any erotica lately-maybe some will pop up!

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 19, 2006 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

This guy ended up

better than the guy who drowned trying to hide his liquor. Good stuff! Sorry I didn't comment the other day when I stopped by. My brain was jello. Take care

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on June 19, 2006 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

astraldreamer

why....this was one of my happier stories. I even named it 'A New Day'

Got the sunglasses on-things are lookin' so bright (give me my gun)

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 19, 2006 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

I like your dark fiction

Short little snippets into very unhappy lives by the looks of things. They are very interesting to read and because they are short, very easy to keep my attention. I'll look forward to the next one.

posted by astraldreamer on June 19, 2006 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony

Thanks

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 19, 2006 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

hehehe you have a wild imagination....

with that said - I am always losing things...I would lose my head if it was not screwed on...

posted by _Symphony_ on June 19, 2006 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

Taps

I guess..its frightening if you compare it to what is normal amd accepted by others.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 18, 2006 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

BrightIrish

Thanks

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 18, 2006 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

Thomas Franklin

posted by BrightIrish on June 18, 2006 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin, That's quite a story because it is just too true for a lot of people. Its more frightening that some of your made-up stories.

posted by TAPS. on June 18, 2006 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Ben

Is never easy to change ones life.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 18, 2006 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

bel 1965

things can be tough

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 18, 2006 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Sophistie

He said that he would do the time for the fines but they said 'oh no no' They can't use jail as a 'behave or else' threat on him.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 18, 2006 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

How's the new vocation? And Happy Father's day to you.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on June 18, 2006 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

I've had days that feel like that!!!

posted by bel_1965 on June 18, 2006 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply

Good Fiction

That sounds like too much in fines for anyone!!

posted by Dr_JPT on June 18, 2006 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Ann (I think)

Yeah, everyone can't handle him.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 17, 2006 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

The Hat is a very tough character. Good story.

posted by A-and-B on June 17, 2006 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Passionflower

Right now...its 'The Hats' life. LOL He refuses to write a word now so I wrote the story. I work off of him constantly and he cracks me up-all the time. His bicycle doesn't have brakes and hes walking a lot. Hence, his shoes are wearing out.lol

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 17, 2006 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

I hope this is fiction or a dream and NOT your real life...

Cuz that would really suck...

Did you see the comment I left you when you suggested I train men to respond to my sexual needs???? I'm looking for students....LOL!

posted by Passionflower on June 17, 2006 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply