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Butterfly9

Yeah, I do best in fiction but I want to branch out.

posted by ThomasFranklin on October 25, 2006 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

That is so intense

, My poor heart was breaking reading this. wow.

butterfly9

posted by Butterfly9 on October 25, 2006 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

Thomas

This was very well written.

posted by BrightIrish on June 18, 2006 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

bel 1965

Did I fool you? Did you think that she was alive and going somewhere? She's dead!! The story was about a coward mortician-just another twist in my twisted stories. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 14, 2006 at 10:24 PM | link to this | reply

Frankenkitty

I wouldn't want to embalm. I don' like attending funerals. Now, funerals are morbid! Although I enjoy watching T.V. shows where they discuss how the egyptians mummified. I can't explain it. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 14, 2006 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

I couldn't do it.

It would be okay to embalm someone if the people are old, but not if they are young. That would be so sad. Not that I think I'd enjoy embalming people. I cry when I bury my cats, never mind pulling kidneys out of bodies.

I don't have a dream job. You know how people always talk about "dream jobs", well, I don't have one. As long as the word job is next to dream, it's ruined. Great story!

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on June 14, 2006 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

I have chills

This is so well illustrated. Wonderful!!!

posted by bel_1965 on June 14, 2006 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

Jacenta

I like to take people to different places within our minds. Thanks for stopping and commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 14, 2006 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin...

Your fiction is a picture well painted. I could see her. I could see him also, in my mind's eye.

posted by jacentaOld on June 14, 2006 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

Symphony

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 11:30 PM | link to this | reply

Taps

Thank You, I agree.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 11:28 PM | link to this | reply

Mandalee

Thanks...few people write about a coward without casting judgement or pity. My coward shows the torment and lack of ability to get where he wants to go.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin, Well written story. "Dying seems less sad than having lived too little."

posted by TAPS. on June 13, 2006 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin,

Beautifully written!

posted by Amanda__ on June 13, 2006 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Great story...I love reading you as you never know what the ending may be..

I love it when you can't predict an ending!...so well done to you with all your stories!

posted by _Symphony_ on June 13, 2006 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Passionflower

This story involves feelings while my other stories poke fun at death. The mortician is tormented and you think that she is going somewhere but its all about death and the end of what we know. Fear of the unkown, desire to end it all wrapped in a beautiful woman who is dead.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderful story...I didn't find it cold at all.

Warm and beautiful! And cleverly written.

posted by Passionflower on June 13, 2006 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Ann

Its a cold, morbid story. I admit it.

posted by ThomasFranklin on June 13, 2006 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Some make up artists even dare to remove the dead's jewelry. Is that bravery? Lol. Good, terrifying tale as usual.

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posted by A-and-B on June 13, 2006 at 3:55 AM | link to this | reply