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wow!
You are now part of My Favorites; love your work.
posted by
dele_campbell
on June 2, 2006 at 1:12 AM
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Great Work, Nice Style
The first and last stanzas are especially good. There is a strong sense of place and of the narrator in that place.
I look forward to more of your work.
--Shawn, "Tall and Skinny Poet"
posted by
TallAndSkinnyPoet
on May 27, 2006 at 3:44 PM
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