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DamonLeigh
I'll have to write that down and stick it to my computer screen so I'll have it handy!  WII4ME

posted by koriani on May 17, 2006 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you Benzinha
You are so right!  I'll have to change it before I make copies.  I was in consumer mode when I created the flyer and I should have been in recruiting mode. 

posted by koriani on May 17, 2006 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

I Agree...
...you always have to think of that radio station - WII-4ME, or What's In It For Me??

Pre-empt and answer that question for your prospects, and you're onto a winner!

D

posted by DamonLeigh on May 17, 2006 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

koriani, I would think that more of the selling info would call to the

prospect. Low start up costs, or free start up or you place orders, we ship, like that....

when I dreamily seek out business ops, I look for what it will cost me, what I have to do to make the money, how much is my cut, do I have to buy and sit on a storage shed full of product, etc.....

The product description might help me to believe in it and to wish to sell it, but, it's the business op that you are selling and not the coffee, really, right?

posted by benzinha on May 16, 2006 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

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