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I just got my book a few months ago! Love it!
posted by
gillfinn
on May 17, 2006 at 2:23 AM
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will you marry me? ha ha we're both married, but i think my husband could benefit from your poem.
posted by
shylow
on May 16, 2006 at 8:16 PM
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Language is woman
Woman's language is in the other side of the warmness
You can understand it when you offer your tenderness
Woman Language in that little velvet pocket softness
If you can hold her past and swift her present through
You will have her tomorrow and she will be for you
Woman is every thing on the earth and the man is her life ?????
posted by
NAJWA
on May 16, 2006 at 3:01 PM
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THANK YOU BOTH VERY MUCH
AS FOR THE REFERENCE TO THE SEASONS, SUBSTITUTE AGES OF A WOMAN FOR SEASONS OF A WOMAN, AND PERHAPS IT WOULD BE A LITTLE CLEARER. 
posted by
FARSAILOR
on May 16, 2006 at 2:52 PM
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I like the idea of comparing women to books because learning is my passion and I enjoy reading both. At times women can seem like an easy read, bu their story can change drastically in a page or two which is why I disagree that you should "look past the stains and creases" and "ignore torn or missing pages" and instead observe them and remember that all pages make up a person, not just the beautifully written ones. Women, people, are also different from normal books because you can't just open up a person whom you fancy and read at your own pace. You must get permission to read certain pages and chapters, some of which you may not ever find out. I like the idea of reading the past, present, and future, because we are constantly reading all three. I got lost once you started talking about seasons and let the old english slip, but overall I think you did a good job of keeping on track with comparing women to books.
posted by
malignantattic
on May 16, 2006 at 1:07 PM
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this is phenomenal!! Samhain_Moon 
posted by
syzygy
on May 16, 2006 at 12:51 PM
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