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Many lessons can be derived from this story. Money and sex are only temporary

posted by adventurer02 on December 18, 2015 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

MsPickles

Thanks

posted by ThomasFranklin on May 14, 2006 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

good story ThomasFranklin

posted by littlemspickles on May 13, 2006 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Hi THomas Franklin.....Kind of reminds me of the mother/son grifters....

I forgot their names but they are locked away in prison....They were quite a pair......Good short story, not easy to do.

posted by MedusaNextDoor on May 12, 2006 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

It made me think

and I enjoyed it. That's double the fun.

posted by Witchflower on May 11, 2006 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

((sigh)) if only that could happen to my ex boy freind

yes TF it happened again. ~Silly Evil has come and roosted on my door step.

posted by SillySoul88 on May 11, 2006 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

Passionflower

Yes, a chill that makes you shiver. The chill of life.

posted by ThomasFranklin on May 11, 2006 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

That last line is really chilling.

You do a good job in a small space of telling your story and drawing your characters.

posted by Passionflower on May 11, 2006 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

THANK YOU MADEMOISELLE

I guess that my computer didn't spell check it cause of the $ signs. Now the world knows that I can't spell.

posted by ThomasFranklin on May 11, 2006 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

A and B

Thats a good one! I didn't consider being sent away to jail. Reminds me of another possible story of a threesome who I wrote about before.

posted by ThomasFranklin on May 11, 2006 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Star4U

Thank you for stopping and commenting.

posted by ThomasFranklin on May 11, 2006 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

This is funny. I didn't feel bad

for the mother at all. I think I dated the son a few times. I know two women that had 5 husbands each. That's the most I have ever met. Only one of them was rich, my friend's grandmother 'Nan'. She left my friend a large inheritance. Ofcourse, all her relatives fought like wolverines over the inhereitance. Everybody got more than I make in two years, but it wasn't enough. The family still fights over money, but it's down to the third generation so nobodys rich. That's what they say, wealth usually only lasts three generations. Great story!

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on May 11, 2006 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

ThomasFranklin...

Your story reminds me of something my father typed once and I found it in his typewriter on a yellowed piece of paper from age.

"Use things, not people. Love people, not things."

Take care and thanks for visiting.

posted by jacentaOld on May 11, 2006 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

What's so great about this story is that, as it entertains,

it also teaches valuable moral lessons.

P.S. Shouldn't the title be FA$T, HARD RELATION$HIP

"And they all lived happily ever after."

posted by Mademoiselle on May 10, 2006 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

If, by chance, she survived, he might spend the rest of his days behind bars. Lol.

(B)

posted by A-and-B on May 10, 2006 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

so funny

posted by star4sky5 on May 10, 2006 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply