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good work

posted by shypettite on June 6, 2006 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

i ponder that question myself.  very good work!

posted by shylow on May 21, 2006 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

What can I do so the sun can

Vey nice work keep it up

posted by Kat02 on May 20, 2006 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

wise and compassionate. 

posted by markng on May 19, 2006 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem....

if only we could do as much as we want.

posted by macphilips on April 27, 2006 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

This is a very nice poem .. I can relate with how you are feeling.

posted by BrightIrish on April 27, 2006 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

A nice sentiment.

We all do nice things, yet we don't seem to be able to get along.

posted by JasonScyte on April 24, 2006 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

hiii..

this is very beautifully written and much different from the ones you have written so far....keep up...

posted by abhilasha on April 24, 2006 at 1:50 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem

Too much sun is dangerous.

posted by FARSAILOR on April 23, 2006 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply