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Graham
Thanks, feel free to note any typos, I can use all the help I can get.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 20, 2006 at 6:44 AM
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another try
Hey DJ,
I tried to post this with my Mac, but Safari has issues with this site. Great poem, it's simple but meaningful and straight to the point.
I noticed maybe a couple of typos, but then I could be wrong. I'll paste the final stanza here to make it easier.
Loved the poem!
Graham
Her price though steep I pay without a "though", honor and love her alone,
When she moves in response, the entire world does shake and simmer,
For the now I shall tell thee no more, "there" be one of her and she’s mine.
posted by
gillfinn
on April 20, 2006 at 6:25 AM
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Hey
posted by
gillfinn
on April 20, 2006 at 6:10 AM
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thanks Katray
It takes beauty to see beauty. Though how I do it, I have not a clue...
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 19, 2006 at 3:55 PM
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You Sir, are a born cynic
and a bloody good one too.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 19, 2006 at 8:53 AM
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"It's Just a Box of Rain"
"Or a Ribbon for your Hair"
"Such along Time to be Gone"
"And a Short Time to be There"
Robert Hunter,
Gerry Garcia R.I.P.
WWP
posted by
WWPiMM
on April 19, 2006 at 8:21 AM
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Lovely thoughts of your Lady
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Katray2
on April 19, 2006 at 5:58 AM
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