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Nicely written. I feel like I was there. Especially the way the eyes keep going back to that strap...it gives it some added reality, not just a fluffy nice memory, but something that really happened and could turn into a bigger story at the next turn.
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DarrkeThoughts
on April 14, 2006 at 6:38 AM
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