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Vange

Nice crescendo :).

Be well,
-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on April 13, 2006 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Greek Tragedy.

Dear Vangelina.. Thanks for you wonderful comments and visiting my blogs. I will not be very active in Blogit because I am trying to finish a few short stories.

The other week I was looking for a book about Greek Tragedy, but I did not find what I was looking for. The store said that I can order it if I know the title. I just cannot remember the title of that Greek Tragedy that the guy married his mother and upon knowing it, he dug out his eyes.

regards for now and I will drop by a line in your writings when I come back with some poetry of stories........  Prof

posted by PROF-SUMAKEL33 on April 12, 2006 at 11:23 PM | link to this | reply

aww that sucks that you had the reverse, but i know how you feel

posted by lilaznthug85 on April 12, 2006 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

..very good..

..well, described..  as one who has experienced trauma induced memory gaps.. I know this scenario well...

posted by MasonGarrett on April 12, 2006 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

great job

this one flowed very nicely together..the end is abrupt but I like it. It seems to match the tone.

posted by microba on April 12, 2006 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

hmm.

Nice work. Read my poems and send comments.

posted by coolacen on April 12, 2006 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

A refreshing change of pace from the ordinary.  It sounds like it would make a great story as well.  I'll have to come back and check out all your stuff.

posted by thelonelyroad on April 12, 2006 at 5:20 AM | link to this | reply