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Absolutely wonderful. The world in a grain of sand. I don't want to start
playing too much the critic on this one as there are so many phrases to praise that I wouldn't know where to stop. I know it's not a sonnet, but the structure reads to me like one, with one idea put forward in stanza one, developed in two, then closed with a punchy couplet. It has that feel.
I can almost imagine you sitting there too with your notebook jotting down all these images and thoughts to rework later.
An awesome poem. I'll be back to this one.
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_dave_says_ack_
on April 11, 2006 at 4:09 AM
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