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I really like this poem
It reads smoothly and has great emotion.
posted by
CarnivalQueen
on April 15, 2006 at 9:28 AM
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great poem and thanks for the comment
posted by
lilaznthug85
on April 11, 2006 at 10:14 AM
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so sad.
This was a great read. your lines wound together well, and it invoked loss and pain. well written.
posted by
microba
on April 11, 2006 at 8:28 AM
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Lonelyroad, I liked this.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on April 11, 2006 at 4:18 AM
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Wonderful words, my friend...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 10, 2006 at 6:13 PM
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Great Loves
Your poem was excellent, reminded me of my mother.... some losses are extremely difficult to bear.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 10, 2006 at 3:48 PM
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